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You are the antagonist...
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Me as the antagonist...
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You lower yourself to me and kiss those tremulous lips. My reflexes make me spit back at you and as a repayment you punch me again; with a rough kiss afterwards to ease the pain. I try to be strong; however, each action you do strip away a fragment of my pride.

You tear away my clothes vigorously. Not caring about my buttoned shirt or my pants, disposing them only a couple of inches away from us.

Your repeated punching muffles my cries and soon after I go silent, closing my eyes and letting my fingers dig deep into the earth. You weren't the one I had met months ago. Everything about you had changed almost overnight; from the way you smiled to the way you spoke. It made me feel as though you had forgotten who I was all together as if you blocked out the happy times we shared. Or maybe that is what turned you this way to begin with.

I never knew that it would be me as the narrator...

Happy Halloween!

Journal Entry: Fri Oct 31, 2014, 4:53 PM
Firstly, Happy Halloween to all of my peons... alive, gone, missing, captured, ect. ect. ect.

Secondly, starting today, I am going to start making test tube babies with twent47blue for giving me an awesome treat, more subscription time. I was just sitting here almost an hour ago trying to remember how to put up a donation box to win over some of you guys for membership. He totally read my mind. With that said... my test tubes babies shall be all yours! :smoking: To kiss, and hug, and feed, and clothe, bathe... and stuff... Ill just... kinda sit there... and watch TV.. and wait until they are old enough to start contributing paychecks to our home... then we can start all over again! :la:

Lastly, I do hope all of you are having a very awesome Halloween. Remember to check all your candies and never eat anything that comes in a box that is not sealed properly. Also, keep a switch blade and/or mace in your pocket at all times just in case a predator tries to snatch you up. Always aim for the jugular, groin area, or boobs... If you are using mace however, be sure to turn your head and spray.... you don't want mother nature being a bitch and blowing it back in your face.
:iconmomseestoo: Cause mommy knows best.

I bet you all are curious what I will be doing tonight... aren't you!? You should be though... cause all I am going to do is stop pass Walmart and buy a king size bag of assorted candies, mix them in a blender with my three favorite kinds of liquor, binge watch Netflix until I'm fully drunk, wail about how boring my life has become, and then, right before midnight, throw on my makeshift Halloween costume and post pictures on my instagram like my ass actually left the house.

Ugh.... :saddrunk:






A Narrator's Kindness

Whatever kindness I do is of my own free will. Nobody is screaming to me to deliver points, or hand out a Llama, fave, comment, visit your page, whatever. If you truly want to look a gift horse in the mouth then the best thing to do is insult them by asking them what would they like in return. Please, if you are in a state of shock that some random deviant you don't normally encounter or interact with suddenly does a generous act and you are the one they acknowledge, take a step back and just smile. So, instead of leaving me a comment telling me how thankful you are with exclamation points and plz accounts, try one of these two methods:

:bulletblack: Take a small trip through the Narrator's gallery of 277 submissions and leave a civilized comment. Maybe even a :+fav:

:bulletblack: Use the kindness you received on somebody else through deviantART. Turn these bounteousness moments into a virus of good intent.


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I do not give out points to those that comment/note me. I am a mean old bitter narrator who can distinguish between a random grateful individual and a beggar. How dare you spot me on another person’s donation box and send me comments and notes... How dare you go to my page and send my friends comments/notes for points! How dare you beg anyone for points! If they feel you need them then they will come to you.



No Beggin' for Points by Drache-Lehre

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:iconkcarey:
KCarey Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2014  Professional Artisan Crafter
Yo, how goes the NaNoing?
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BlueBlueFox Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
NARRATOR YOU LIIIIIIIIVE
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Broken-King Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014
So, dude, did you die or something?
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naomi-321 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Student Photographer
I'm sorry I missed your birthday, but I do love your work.
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BlackBoney Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
happy bday!
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