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Me as the antagonist...
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You lower yourself to me and kiss those tremulous lips. My reflexes make me spit back at you and as a repayment you punch me again; with a rough kiss afterwards to ease the pain. I try to be strong; however, each action you do strip away a fragment of my pride.

You tear away my clothes vigorously. Not caring about my buttoned shirt or my pants, disposing them only a couple of inches away from us.

Your repeated punching muffles my cries and soon after I go silent, closing my eyes and letting my fingers dig deep into the earth. You weren't the one I had met months ago. Everything about you had changed almost overnight; from the way you smiled to the way you spoke. It made me feel as though you had forgotten who I was all together as if you blocked out the happy times we shared. Or maybe that is what turned you this way to begin with.

I never knew that it would be me as the narrator...

Nar and the 17 step progam

Journal Entry: Tue Oct 28, 2014, 9:36 PM
Firstly I want to thank many of you for giving me awesome ideas on how to break my writing block and become the all-powerful once again. Since Nano is right around the corner I feel somewhat compelled to take the dive and stress myself out with it... I feel like that will really kick start the ol' writing juices. (I can't do that baby step thing... I literally gotta belly flop right on in.. ass and all!)

With that said I casually noticed that I have MEMEs for writers block! OMG
:iconlspplz::iconsaysplz:like nu-uuh Nar! oh no u diden't 

So I have started to do one... and boy oh boy is it helping me big time. Already I have gone from comical to my usual emotionally dysfunctional. I uhh... I feel like I may be writing waaay too much for each of these little prompts so I don't think I will upload the whole thing at once. I was told it would be best to just upload one or two prompts at a time and turn them into little vignettes or something [aren't they still short stories?]

Anyway my goal is to have this meme done before the start of the Nano.. I am going in unprepared this time.. no bios or nothing... I can already feel like creative obsessive compulsive prowess turning in its grave at the thought. Expect years of homeless type demons!! They just found my address on google! :nirvana:






A Narrator's Kindness

Whatever kindness I do is of my own free will. Nobody is screaming to me to deliver points, or hand out a Llama, fave, comment, visit your page, whatever. If you truly want to look a gift horse in the mouth then the best thing to do is insult them by asking them what would they like in return. Please, if you are in a state of shock that some random deviant you don't normally encounter or interact with suddenly does a generous act and you are the one they acknowledge, take a step back and just smile. So, instead of leaving me a comment telling me how thankful you are with exclamation points and plz accounts, try one of these two methods:

:bulletblack: Take a small trip through the Narrator's gallery of 277 submissions and leave a civilized comment. Maybe even a :+fav:

:bulletblack: Use the kindness you received on somebody else through deviantART. Turn these bounteousness moments into a virus of good intent.


:iconangrymobplz::iconangrymobplz::iconangrymobplz:
I do not give out points to those that comment/note me. I am a mean old bitter narrator who can distinguish between a random grateful individual and a beggar. How dare you spot me on another person’s donation box and send me comments and notes... How dare you go to my page and send my friends comments/notes for points! How dare you beg anyone for points! If they feel you need them then they will come to you.



No Beggin' for Points by Drache-Lehre

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BlueBlueFox Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
NARRATOR YOU LIIIIIIIIVE
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Broken-King Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014
So, dude, did you die or something?
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naomi-321 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Student Photographer
I'm sorry I missed your birthday, but I do love your work.
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BlackBoney Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
happy bday!
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20Tourniquet02 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014
:party::cake:HAPPY BIRTHDAY!:cake::party:
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