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This is one of my favorite installments. It introduces quite a few things as well as foreshadow others. Heh I will not dive in to them all for you.. (You gotta guess) But I will say that Giovanni from this point on will be wearing shorts! Him running around "free" makes this story rated R! I don't want it up there I want it some where in the middle. This chapter also dives into the world of Jetice... as far as how he sees others and what he has had to deal with. Its a somewhat sad chapter for me because Giovanni is still learning the world and is starting to understand that he does have a true friend. ... .. .. I personally wouldn't trust him considering he is a demon.. and all..

By the way... what happen to Leviticus? :giggle:

Please read and comment... thanks..
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=JinShiranai Jun 1, 2010  Student Writer
The Bible, Leviticus's journal? That's one hell of a journal. =o

Gio has been running around in the nude this entire time, hasn't he. :doh:

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*MeAsTheNarrator Jun 2, 2010
Yea... a friend read the story (before the last two chapters) and was like, "I'm sorry but... I keep seeing Giovanni flapping around in the wind when he is going about his normal stroll... He needs some clothes."

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=JinShiranai Jun 2, 2010  Student Writer
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~Ikeziu Feb 22, 2010
I love how.. Innocent, yet believable and realistic Giovanni is. c: It's hard to write about animals/non-human beings and keep them believable (believe me - I've tried!!), but you do it very well. :clap:

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*MeAsTheNarrator Feb 22, 2010
:iconmonkeyloveplz: Thank you... thank you.... I try so hard.. I gotta keep approaching him as a little child. Its hard switching my own personality in order to play each character... I want them to sound a real as possible... in the world of fantasy of course...

However.. I could so see someone with Giovanni's personality.

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~Ikeziu Feb 22, 2010
You're welcome :hug:
And approaching him as a child, as you say, sounds like a good strategy of writing about him. Especially since he hasn't really known the real world, as he has lived almost his entire life in a lab...
Hmm, yeah, at times, one almost has to have mild DID (split personality) to write about different characters. :giggle:

...well, true. However, even a human with his personality would be hard to write about, especially if you're... Not that innocent yourself :evillaugh:-- *ahem* ^^;

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*MeAsTheNarrator Feb 22, 2010
:pray: Then this is a good role for me! Ha... I'd be an oxymoron if I said that lol

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*Leonca Feb 4, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Jetice is so silly. :lol:
I especially like how they mistook the bible for Leviticus’ journal. Wouldn’t he be horrified to know that it had been thrown onto the floor of some random pub! :XD:
Aww, Giovanni kind of reminds me of Dog (he appeared in the first story meme), what with being so cute, innocent, and naked. =p I’m not sure what would be worse, being nude or wearing smelly pants pulled from a dumpster…

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*MeAsTheNarrator Feb 5, 2010
:iconthinkplz: Hmmm You know what I think Giovanni might say the same... Lol I must say... I would never allow someone to find me shorts in the garbage can... it seems so unsanitary... But then again.. if food is involved.. heh..

Lol I still remember that meme question number XVI where Dog wakes up in the bed with a random person. Lol in human form he sounds so innocent lol

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